DEATH
is so starnge
so still
so final
so irreversible
so gut wrenching
so blatant
so unfathomable
so incomprehensible
so unnnerving
so ovewhelming
so cold
so intimidating
so numbing
so quiet
so loud
is such a slap on the soul
and vaccum in the heart
death
is so peaceful
for those who embrace it
and anything but
for those who embrace them
5 comments:
Death is the end of the journey of life.not soul.
Well... the poem is rather interesting. It does appear to be just a clutter of adjectives but that seems more appropriate a description for the unfatomable entity called death. Thoughts after all, can get diluted when structured rigidly.
The progression of thoughts is....well I wont say peculiar bit it catches the eye , ranging form largely fear to acceptance and a hint of curiosity.
Keep writing... for the poets are rare in this world ful of writers
I love the last line..thank you so much...
I love the last line..thank you so much...
Rightly put. Every time I think of death, I think if of few of those adjectives you've used.
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