i take it all in
and then i let it all go
i'm trying to try
i'm going with the flow
i'm not trying to make sense
i'm not bothering to rationalize
just taking things as they come
and tryin not to sensationalize
my poetry is all i have
its all i hold on to
it is all i feel
and all i see
it is all i try to be
i know it isn't fantabulous
but atleast its "me"..
as much a part
as this heart
and soul...
4 comments:
If you think it isn't fabulous, Your wrong. 'Cuz it most certainly is.
Shut up <3
thanks ju..but really it isn't...
I can see a lot of soul searching here...and i guess by 'soul' u mean your inner self(not the Indian version).. I really like the way in which the no. of words keep increasin in the first paragraph and keep decreasing in the second(called yati in sanskrit and a prevalent poetic device). I guess it was uninteional but if u can do try to include such devices(but not at the cost of dilution of thoughts)
Thanks Akshay..yes is was unintentional..infact I didn't even realise it till you mentioned it..trust you to know something like that..thanks anyway ..I'll keep what you said in mind
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