one upon whom i can always depend
one who'll be true and not pretend
when my heart is broken,who'll mend
and a helping hand, always lend
my feelings correctly comprehend
and upon his ideals never bend
to wounds and worries who'll tend
admit his mistakes and make amend
loads of time with me he should spend
and occasionally a gesture of love,send
individualistic, not a follower of trend
and physical barriers he should transend
be on my side and always defend
not just a lover but a friend
with love that'll never end
i wantt that kind of a boyfriend
5 comments:
aww.. doesn't every gurl feel da same ?????????? it has universal appeal.
downside of the poem:
de poetic beauty will be EASILY OVERLOOKED by de essence it conveyed.
ppl ain't gonna say "nice poem" bt wud end up givin de " I- NOE- HOW -U- FEEL" signs
Yeah i noticed the poetic beauty but the connection took over towards the end :)
that makes a poet even more happy i guess :)
sigh. no nithya i dotn think we'll ever get.wait, you'll get i wont get.
sigh.sigh.sigh.
i second vino!
but i have to say it!we all feel the same way!!!:)
glad my poem has a universal appeal and sad that it isn't in touch with reality and manase..if you won't get..where do i stand a chance huh?
oh shut up you #$%@$%$^$^#$^#$^$^$^$^!
you stand a huge chance, im going to be soooo single all the time!
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